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Wednesday 24 September 2014

Mary-reading learning log

Mary-Writing Learning Log

Cyber Smart Reflection

This term I have achieve my cyber smart goal by using online safely by avoiding the website that cause virus to my netbook,by using the right website, by using online to do school work and homework. Next term I will try my best by learning cyber smart to achieve my new goals.

Mary-Math Learning Log

Wednesday 17 September 2014

Modern Fishing Method report- crafting

WALT to craft an information report about modern fishing methods.


Tips to guide your Writing:
Bullet point plan:
Your Writing:h
TITLE:
What is the title of your Information report?


INTRODUCTION:  
Begin with linking 2-3 facts to do with the background information about modern fishing methods (what do they do? What is the controversy?) Let your reader know what they will be reading about throughout your report.

Second paragraph:  
Link 2-3 of your facts about the types of fishing methods.  Explain the kinds of methods, give examples of the methods. Explain how they target certain fish.


Third paragraph:  
Link 2-3 of your facts about the problems with modern fishing methods. Explain how these methods can cause problems. Give examples of specific problems caused by a particular method (e.g. longlining).

Fourth paragraph:  
Link 2-3 of your facts about the possible solutions to the problems with modern fishing methods. Explain why these are important. Give examples of how they can help.


Conclusion:
End your information report by retelling the modern fishing methods you talked about. Re-iterate why they can be problematic and why they need to be changed.  Give a personal response to the topic.  
Fishing practises - plan..

  • First we are going to make the reader  want to read more by using or asking them question that they might want to know but can’t find it  - But we’re not going to give them an answer we’re just giving them information  about what they want to know


  • And then we are going to tell them all sorts of fishing  methods ( and some  parts on the fishing method) that is killing our favourite sea animals

  • then we are going to carry on with the problem (plus we’re gonna  ask them some question or give them some advice  to give them some ideas )

  • And then we are going to tell them how we can stop it and why


  • and to end it off we are going to write something that would make them want to stop the problem without any Question…

And That's Our Plan

By : Of Course Mjkingi & Mary
...NATURE PROTECTION: FISHING METHOD...


Hi! talented readers , if you are wondering ,why sea animals  are dying or what's going on with humans  and nature.

Well then sit back ,relax and  maybe get a meal or a drink, because it’s going to be a long experimenting situation with our nature kind.

First, lets focus on our fishing methods such as  bottom Trawling , Dredging , Gillnetting and Longline , if you’re thinking why does this  relate to nature, well we're getting there  just a minute!

Now these fishing method, are really dangerous because they all destroy the seafloor and accidentally kill marine sea animals by dragging heavy gear or getting them tangled in their net by blocking their way from swimming.

So as you can see these fishing method is a problem not just to us but  to the ocean and marine animals.

If you do anything for for the marine animals and the pacific and beautiful ocean then you too can be an  ocean hero!

CLICK HERE  AND BE AMAZE :
make the right choice

Happily by: MJkingi & Mary


Giving The Ocean A Voice, definitions

Giving The Ocean A Voice